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Waken up being kidnapped

Remembering getting worse

Torture by his fears of exploding balloons

Can't hold his temper

And eyes turn blood red

Red sparks around him

And he transforms

From a frightened thunder

To a furious lightning

Lost his memory

And he falls into the trap

Gone to attack his family and friends

Unable to stop him

Got defected too easy

Even the two of himself

Tried their best but sadly failed

Why, BoBoiBoy Halilintar, why?

Why you forget yourself?

Your friends?

Your granddad?

Another two of yourself?

Just one last second before he destroys them all

He recovered his memory

Thanks to the 'Terbaik' word

That was said by Probe

Defect the bad guys

And back to normal

He is a powerful hero now

And using powerful versions

Is the new power of BoBoiBoy

I written this poem for all of the fans of BoBoiBoy!

This is about BoBoiBoy Halilintar (Lightning). :iconbbbhalilintarplz: How he made his first appearance, he gone insane and finally turned back to normal.

How do you think? I am good in writing poems. Chinese and English. My teachers always praise me on my talent of writing poems.

This is 100% original written by me (except the characters and the events). BoBoiBoy belongs to Animonsta Studios. Poem by me, :icontruehero10:

P.S. Have you notice his eyes have tears? What makes it happen? This picture is from the final episode.
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DestinyWing Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Something tells me that he has a very traumatising past...
If it did, it would make sense why sadness is main emotion in the finale besides anger and happiness from the past episodes. 

I watched short films that involved Murder and Crime, I searched in your home country and I have found lots of short films. 
The last one, probably is the one I am not surprised and yet surprised about the Murder case. The short film involved an 11 year old boy butchered a 3 year old child to death. He confessed that he burned him with hot water, stabbed him with scissors, sliced him with a butcher knife, then pulverised him by placing the body in a sack while watching it being ran by a truck.
When the police asked him why, he just smiled.
slender33 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Great poem!
ProximaCentauri97 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
pergh!!!!!!! TERBAEK!!!!!!! The best of the best!! two thumbs up, man!!!!
p/s : did YOU edited the pic to have tears of was he really cried??? errr.......
truehero10 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Thank you~ The picture: I DID NOT edit it, I took it from the Internet. And in the episode, I have seen it very clearly that he has tears on it~
ProximaCentauri97 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
seriously??????? interesting...why?? Why was he...CRYING?????? WHY??? WHY I didn't realized that??? cute..hehe
samix19 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice one!!! I like it!!!
Wishdomsky01 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
i like last tecnics....
i called it -> (Boboiboy Omnislash Attack)
Chibichibiichigo Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME!!!! :iconlainloveplz:
Fia-V98 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waaaaahhhhhhh :la: :la:
Danma-chan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE it!!! :iconepiclaplz:
nuazka Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME!! :iconso-awesomeplz:
ryocutema Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
AWESOME~!!! >o<
You're very good indeed!
KittyKaina Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's nice! Even I can't make an english poem like that. I can only make english riddles. Anyway, it's nice!
NourMakky Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
lol love boboiboy ^^,
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